Hermione, in an act of childishness, turned down Harry when he confessed his feelings for her. This caused a downward spiral that left Harry defenseless and resulted in both his death and Voldermor...
Well, it's more Harry's fault than Hermione's. First, he took ages to make her even think she had a chance. Second, he was the one who ignored her letters afterwards. If she was behaving like a child, he was behaving like a bloody foetus.
Harry is acting a real blody git so far in this story. I do not like that.
I can see Harry & Hermione taking longer together, but not for Harry to reject Hermione.
Please fix it so Harrt & Hermione get togerher fast?
Please update soon?
(#) Esus 2011-10-26
It's a shame you never finished this story. I like the premise and it's well written, not to mention it seems like you actually spent time coming up with an outline for its pace.
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