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All We Are
(#) mooniexmisfit 2008-01-20
fantastically lovely.
I'm still looking for a connection between payton and pete.
OH NO, one tree hill. we should all forget that.Author's response
Thanks for the positive reviews!
I actually never watched One Tree Hill..though I hear it mentioned alot. lol
I want to build up to where Payton and Pete meet. I don't want to bore people, but I want to set it up well enough so it makes good sense.All We Are
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-01-20
this is really interesting so far. i like how you've set it up...one chapter for payton, one for pete. i cant wait to see what you do next!!! update soon!!!
cheers!Author's response
Thanks! I think I'm going to go back and forth for a bit more, until the story picks up, and something connects the characters. This is my first story EVER so bare with me. :)
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