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Kai's final moments. (Heavy use of improper language. Be forewarned.)
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Fairy Wings
(#) Rush 2006-01-30
I must say I greatly enjoyed this chapter! It's very descriptive and detailed. I never read a I guess I can say this, "Wanna-be" Authors work so well presentable before. You, by far are and will be one of the best authors.
I'm curious, why not to publish your work? You have the ability! You do know that right? Well if not allow me to say it... "Go Published." Your writing is superb. The best I seen around on one of these sites since... well hell I'm not even sure!
Please, do us and yourself the favor (though I don't think it's doing the fans on here any justices but it will you) try it. They always say, "Nothing ventured nothing gained" am I correct? There's always someone looking for a new talented author to fancy around! You've got the ability and I know for a FACT, I'm not the only one who stands behind this idea. ^.^
Well, I do believe I have said enough. Your story is enjoyable. Fresh Dialogue and very well-written. I envy you. Your one of my favorite authors. ^.^
Until next time...
~Cheers
Author\'s Response: eee! two reviews! lucky! and about publishing: i'd love to, only you can't swing a dead cat around the place i live in without hitting a wanna-be author. not only are the standards SCARY, nobody appears to be reading their books anyway. not exactly the most encouraging situations, but what the hell. ^__^ oh by the way, i hope you don't mind, but i checked out your profile. wow, you're lucky. writing AND drawing? you could make your own graphic novel or manga or something. that'd be cool.
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