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Obi-Wan Kenobi & Qui-Gon Jinn: The First Lapse
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Forbidden Kisses
(#) street-howitzer 2007-01-16
"One another moment's thought" - Probably, this should be "on", or else I'd eliminate the "one" entirely, personally.
"Certainly is looks like" - It looks like?
You write sexual/emotional tension between characters very well; the undercurrent of emotions between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are beautifully handled.
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