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• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) mathiasgranger 2008-02-09

  Well, I have to admit this plot of Pansy's is more boring than anything else. A very underwhelming chapter this time, but perhaps it was necessary for where you are taking the story.
  
  At this point why don't you just have her attack Hermione successfully and than have Draco kill Harry.
  
  Thanks for writing,
  Matt

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Jimm 2008-02-09

  Nice chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Teresa 2008-02-09

  Shakes head...it looks as though a certain bunch of idiots will learn regret the hard way. One would think that Agathon was old enough to know better, and that Lucius would realize that he'd gotten off lightly with Harry's allies on the previous occasion. As for Draco and Pansy, they'd best make the most of their time at school. I think it will be a very short term for them. Just getting on Harry's bad side is stupid, but several of Harry's mentors like her in her own right. As always Dr.T your story is full of intrigue, detail, and excitement! Many thanks!

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) dennisud 2008-02-09

  I'm glad you've factioned the Brotherhood as its been a bit too one-sided. Still I have the feeling that things will come up short for the DE's and the Slytherins.
  
  dennisud

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) PerfesserN 2008-02-09

  Plans within plans, and Harry doesn't have a clue? Hmmmmm, perhaps Luna can give hime one?
  Nice little sinister forshadowing at the end, not quite a cliffie, but something to think about as we wait for the next chapter, eh?
  N!

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-09

  I both like and dislike how many things are currently left hanging. Hopefully the next chapter will resolve at least one of them. The Agathon issue won't present itself for a while, but I think Pansy is too impatient to wait much longer with Hermione.
  
  Looking forward to the fireworks.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) sparky40sw 2008-02-10

  there are a whole pile of classic mistakes of youth piling up on the horizon there - looking like a series of tornados about to strike.
  
  Will Draco's little theft do undiscovered until it is used? Are the brotherhood spread so thin that they do not have monitoring on Agathon ( who really needs eradication)?
  
  thanks for continuing this great story

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) jabarber69 2008-02-10

  You know I would kill to protect my family! People like Pansy in your story seem to never realize that!

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) banner 2008-02-10

  It's SO aggravating that Hogwarts doesn't even detect, let alone bar Dark Objects. In a world where JKR had some of the most obvious protections on a school, A Teacher used a Blood Quill on a student. I enjoyed this quieter chapter, and its buildup of tension.

  Author's response

  Now how can the little darlings develop without the staff fully trusting them? You must not be a Pureblood. . . .

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) BJH 2008-02-11

  If I have to admit that I haven't been reviewing this story like I should although I have been dilegently reading it and enjoying it.
  
  I am curious as to what you have up your sleeve with regards to Ginny, and Luna for that matter. But what I am truly looking forward to is how Pansy's lack of true understanding of what the blade does will bite her in the arse. Will the jealousy be involved and will the justice be poetic? I think so.
  
  BJH

  Author's response

  Pansy will suffer, yes. In some ways, she gets the worst punsihments of all so far.
  
  "T"

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