- Very nicely done. Even though it would make a very short story it would be very interesting to have Harry continue to things with Luna and her father and it destroys Voldie without Harry even going back to England and when he does get back for the start of school he wonders why everyone is so happy.
- Interesting chapter. I love how you kept Luna the same as she was in the book. As much as i can see it possible the whole facade Loony just seems to cheapen the character. I wonder how long until everyone realizes that Harry is missing. Can't wait for the next chapter later
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-12Very good, and the relationship between Luna and Harry is growing slowly but surely, and a lot of things to wonder about here. Will be interesting to see what else comes of this vision Harry had, what else will be waiting for them in the forest, and whether Tom will go aftger them, and also nice to see a Bella who has a bit of humanity, rather than the single-minded insane killer that she's usually portrayed as.
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