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• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) Alyss 2008-02-15

  that was sweet of rick to follow, but he deserved it.
  what was he doing over at scarlets?? theres no real need for extra practice is there??
  scarlet- just misunderstood....
  is anna gona try and make rick jealous?? thru mikey....????
  
  mianna...sooon!!!!!!! =]
  xx

  Author's response

  In the first draft he didn't. But tha would ruin the spectacular (lol) thing I have planned.
  At Scarlet's? Talking, usual stuff.
  Yay, now yo uget it,
  lolz, oh yeah, 'cause she's that mean.
  
  Mianna= maybe
  xxx

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) mychemicaldream0201 2008-02-15

  “Where you last night?” Mrs Wilkinson snapped
  you should probably add a "were" in there somewhere.
  :D
  but otherwise there were few grammar mistakes.
  /end grammar nazi.

  Author's response

  Thanks! So sorry about that. I didn't proof it, (as you can tell!) Has now been edited.
  Once more, thanks.

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) tragicWithACapital_T 2008-02-15

  rick is nice but uh... i don't like him
  GO WITH MIKEY
  GO WITH MIKEY
  GO WITH MIKEY!
  :D
  
  gawsh amanda, DON'T CORRECT THE WOMAN'S GRAMMAR! -glares at mychemicaldream021-
  
  continue with your teensy grammar mistakes darling, the story is top notch :]
  
  i love it

  Author's response

  What's wrong with Rick? Though I agree, Mikey's better, but Will= the greatest.
  :]
  
  Thanks

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) x_Charlie_x 2008-02-17

  I really hope that she is just a friend although having had my head screwed with also the doubts are there.
  Good chapter =) Can't wait to see more =D

  Author's response

  What can I say? Not a lot really, so I won't say anything at all.
  Thanks.

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