Categories > Anime/Manga > Naruto > Observation
Gaara has a lot of time on his hands so he uses it to observe someone interesting. A dash of GaaLaa
(#) Ebod 2006-03-04...You know I love you right?
That was just unbearably hot and... melts into a puddle of goo Lee, you naughty boy! XD (Of course, this is coming from someone who was chanting "molest him, molest him!" during the story, but...)
I think "form and precise" is suppose to be "firm and precise", but other than that, great job! :D
(#) ETraged 2006-04-01I never really thought about this pairing much before, but this story definately has me thinking about it now. It definately leaves you hoping for more!
(#) rhynny 2006-04-20gaara!wat are you doing?! molest him already!!!
i hope this is not a one-shot (but i have a feeling it is)
thank you for sharing this story. wonderful wonderful!
(#) anime_aleah 2006-07-07That was really creative at the end with the lee part. I enjoyed it greatly. You should make a sequel. That would rock!
(#) RazZadig 2006-08-11Loved the visuals on this one. Incredibly easy to imagine Lee acting as you described. The tan-line free body image was especially electrifying. The only thing I had trouble with was the position of Gaara outside the window. Was he crouching, across the street, in a bush? Not a major thing. The focus stays on Lee's ritual and that grabs the reader's attention. As for the narrative, got right to the point, stayed on task and left us hungering for more--the best kind of short story. Keep writing!
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