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Book 1: Chapter 1
7 reviewsA start at retelling the Harry Potter series. Harry has one magical ability that is used correctly he will become the most accomplished wizard of all.
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effingereimagus
(#) Pointer 2008-02-20
Oops, I just noticed the parody classification.
Since Tonks is older than Harry in canon, I didn't expect the Tonks' to be picking him up.
Also wouldn't expect any professor to turn loose of him without forcible use of a pry bar, after his demonstration.
Then noticed the humor and parody class.
Enjoyed it. Look forward to more.effingereimagus
(#) Isebas 2008-02-20
This story has been pretty good so far. I think that the first chapter is a little cramped. I think there might have been too much info in it. But I think if it had been stretched out a bit more and it would be excellent; just a friendly suggestion.
McG was pretty calm about him doing advanced magic. Are you going to put Harry in the same house? I think Ravenclaw or Slytherin might be good. I hope Harry and Tonks are friends and maybe more later. I can't wait for an update so keeep up the good work.Author's response
I am already following in the footsteps of two fanfictions; one that I have read that has Harry and Tonks in Ravenclaw, and then other has Harry in Slytherin with Tonks in Gryffindor. They are really good fics but they have Harry to dark. I am going to follow the original story as well as I can with my few little changes. I am currently having trouble-fitting DH to fit with my changes so I might end up doing something completely different for the last book.
As for McGonagall she was just stunned. Also as a laid-back guy, I have a hard time seeing through Professor McGonagall's eyes. Maybe I should have made it Flitwick; he is a laid-back guy like me.
I do plan on having Harry and Tonks be pranksters to rival the twins so if you have any good prank ideas I would be grateful.effingereimagus
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-02-21
This is interesting. I'm ready for the next chapter.effingereimagus
(#) Genericrandom5 2008-02-22
Heh heh heh. Potential abounds. Mayhem approaches. I like it. Keep it up.effingereimagus
(#) Sch1av0na 2008-02-26
The problem I have with this chapter is that there is no spacing between paragraphs or speakers. It is basically one block of minimally formatted text.
This makes it almost unreadable in my opinion. If this is corrected I'll give it another shot.
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