by shdwanna 3 reviews"Every so often, the universe conspires to punch you in the chest." A response to a real advertisement.
Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Maes Hughes, Roy Mustang - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2005-05-10 - Updated: 2005-05-10 - 73 words - Complete
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I think you said more in 100 words than epics could say - you captured more emotion and feeling more than many a larger fic. The first part made me want to laugh, but then then next made me want to cry. Many kudos to you, this one is certainly rec!worthy.
I almost totally blew this story off because it was so short, and then I was like, "OMG, it's short, I can muster up the energy to read it." And I did, and it totally broke my heart. Way to go! Pffft.
That really is a punch in the chest. Way to go, you made me cry.
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