(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-25:o Poor Geeeee! Really makes you want to reach out and just hug him to death, doesn't it?
The part where he passed out was really well written, i mean really really well written. Everything was, of course, but that part even gave me the chills. I was gasping just like Finch.
I'm glad his mom doesn't care about him being gay, that should help him a lot. Frankie being with him would probably help too. A lot more.
Anyways, congrats on the awesome chapter. Now that you're not grounded we can expect another one soon... right? xD
- Hey, umm, strange question here...
My friend is Gay.
And he would like to post your story on www.theblackparade.net, as the story line reminds him of his past.
He is way to embbarrased to ask you himself, (no idea why) But he would be greatul if you said yes. You would get a thankyou of course at the start, saying that wrote it and everything.
His name is James.
Sp, please, say yes. For him.
Love Rosa xox
Author's responseYes, I would allow this as long as I get full credit for the story. :P Sorry, it's an ego thing. I'd be flattered, really. Tell your friendI say I wish him the best of luck. :]
(#) linerlover 2008-04-07wow. ive just read this all in one go, so i got the entire thing. and wow. i stayed up till 3am to read it. really intense, and i love your writing style. basically i love this story, so more soon?
and again. wooooooooooowwwwwwww.
i would say im speechless, but i think that aint possible with me. so you get lots of 'wow's instead.
- Thankyou, so, so much.
Theres the link if your interested in feedback, maybe you could even get an account?
Author's responseNo problem! I also created an account on there. My screen name is AGoddessFinch (as it is on my deviantART and livejournal). I see there has already been some good feedback and I'm so flattered you chose to use my work! Thank you so much!
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