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Mother, May I?
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-03-29
Weird. Different and AWESOME!
I loved it!
But the last bit. Your stepdad doesn't hit you does he?
I hope not.
But that was fantastic!
Keep it up! =P
AJ Xx...
Author's response
Thank you!!!
Uh, no, he doesn't hit me...that was just something replacing something else. Nothing serious =D
Thanks again!Mother, May I?
(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-03-30
hey
this was awesome
no offence but did you base it slightly on the book "you don't know me"
its written at the beginning the same way
ish
anyway
awesomeAuthor's response
Yeah, the beginning.
Guess I should add that, huh?
Thank you for reading.Mother, May I?
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-03-31
Wow, that was really good and actually really sad...as it happens to many people and happened to my friend when she was younger but by her actual father..
Really, really good as usual :]
Author's response
Aw...
It's really upsetting to hear about things like this, it makes me extremely depressed.
I don't get attacked, but as I have made clear, I don't like my stepdad. He's a creepy sorta guy.
Anyway, thank you for the review.Mother, May I?
(#) XXblackrocker91XX 2008-04-01
wow.,.,that was really awesome and sad too.,,I hope things will work out with your mom and your stepdad.,.,
x.
MaeMother, May I?
(#) Jess21 2008-07-18
Oh my gee, until I read the first review and your reply I was frightened that your stepdad may have hit you.
This is a fantastic story and really emotional. I'm now off to read some of your other stories because this is great! =]
Mother, May I?
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-01-27
....I have to say that this is probably one of my favorites ^_^
I feel so bad for the kids that actually go through that sort of crap, though. when i see someone who has bruises i dont care what happened i just wanna hold em and listen to them speak, ya know?
REVENGEAuthor's response
Yeah, I know. Thank you for reading.Mother, May I?
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-02-16
I'm sorry that you don't have a good relationship with your stepfather. My parents are just starting to get into their first relationships since the divorce, so I know how hard and painful it can be. I hate everyone my parents date. Even if I haven't met them.
But anyway, I cried when I read that. It was remarkably beautiful, and it really spoke to me. I absolutely adore it and I think you should write more stuff like this- deep emotional stuff. Because that was truly amazing.
-AlbiAuthor's response
Thank you so much, that means a lot. You know, yeah, it's really difficult to see your parents with someone new. My relationship with my stepdad is thankfully getting better, although still it's just hard to accept and every little thing that he does wrong seems like a huge crime. And now that my dad is getting married, I'm just completely put off. But those are just tales from another broken home, I guess.
Anyway, thank you again for reading. And I like to think that even when I'm writing Frerard or something like that, a deep emotional message lies beneath. =PMother, May I?
(#) mildlyobsessed 2009-09-01
really cool. original :) you can write about alot of different subject matters really well :)
good writing!Author's response
Aw THANK YOU. That means a lot. I love you for reading all my one-shots. You're amazing.Mother, May I?
(#) xx_eddi_xx 2011-06-11
for the record, thats in my top five books.
very good. good job at making it your own.
--E
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