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Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II
(#) AnnF 2008-04-15
Typos
"there breathe Ron said." their breath. Ron said, "
And also having the first fourth of the chapter from the 1st isn't good. please correct.Author's response
I have no idea what you're trying to say with that last sentence.Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-04-15
I like the encounter with Snape. I've seen something similar, but this was nicely done.
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