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• Landing on his feet

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-05

  Interesting start to a story and with a lot of backstory that needs to be at lesat sketched in. I do like the way things are developing, so far, and I can't wait to see how he gets out of this predicament. He's obviously learned a fair bit in the years he's been traipsing the globe and it'll be quite interesting to see what more he learns from the Amazons. With him as the only male around, if he survives and proves himself worthy, you may need to change this rating to NC-17. ;D

• Landing on his feet

  (#) toranosuke 2008-04-06

  A great first chapter, it's long, detailed, well-written and smutty =). Even though more background information is needed before everything makes sense, the story is flowing quite well and you can put in the details at your leisure.
  
  Also, why didn't Harry try apparating away? These people seem simple enough to not know any wards, though maybe their predecessors did.

• Landing on his feet

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-04-06

  Hmm, really interesting start here, and looking forward to hoiw this goes from here. It seems like this Harry is very lonely, and afraid while hiding behind his bravado, and it sounds like things went really bad before he finally kicked Lord thingy's butt. Going to be really interesting to see what all goes down next time, will he somehow survive his heart being torn out, and will he be staying with the Amazons? Got to say, he's a bit more cold-blooded it seems when he's fighting for his life than canon, which is a good thing, imo. Got to wonder if we can get some more background on what all he learned, as well as how things wqent with the Amazons. Great start!

• Landing on his feet

  (#) Innortal 2008-04-06

  Nice work, kept him from being too powerful, and learning even he still had weaknesses. Looking forward to reading more.

• Landing on his feet

  (#) Vilkath 2008-11-18

  Intersting start, only real problem I suppose is the lack of consistancy in reguards to Harry and what he can do. I can't imaigne super world travler harry surviving all the ancient ruins and isolated villages if he acted liek this. He could got away millions of times but he lingered behind for no reason when multiple magical means were available to him, not the least of which should been an emergency escape portkey.
  
  Then we have him get so angry over a destroyed rune (which he should been able stop the monkey begin with) he lashes out blindly, dropsh is wand and destroys a backup.. then just ignores his surroundings to get clubbed in back the head.
  
  Pick a Harry, either he's knowledgable and strong, or dumb and stupid don't shift it to fit your needs other wise it looks really dumb when he has complete lapses of all common sense.

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