- I don't quite undestand what this story is supposed to be about. You are retelling the tale of Tenchi Muyou like it has been re-told many times, but you did not add anything special or original. In fact you have taken out almost all the suspension and dramatic tension that existed when it was told in the OVA or the first tv-series. There is I am afraid to say nothing very interesting happening.
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