(#) DragonWing 2012-08-09Pretty decent story. Good humor every now and then. Overall, pretty good.
Not the best story I've ever read (there's a lot of telling us what's happening and not enough showing us what's happening) but it's well-written and flows nicely.
Author's responseThanks for the complements. This is the oldest of my stories, so I'm not surprised that you found it a little rough. Hopefully, I'm learning from my mistakes.
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