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The moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
5 reviewsRyan and brendon. What can i say?
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The moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
(#) CwazzleBear 2008-04-14
haha EMMA!!! wassup bro!?!? lol bro funneh.. anywayz... yes.. i know it is you... (yes this is clare... dah.. anyway)
i saw this on myspace.... its good... gtg... u better continue... lol.. PATD!!! MOSH!!!! byeThe moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-04-14
Awesome, I love highschool fics! ^_^
I have a little constructive criticism for you, if you
don't mind. Don't worry, it's pretty good, just make sure to capitalize all of your sentences, and to put periods in where the dialogue ends. Their were only a couple of spelling mistakes at the beginning, but other than that it's good!
I hope you won't take offence
and hate me now, I just like to
help out new writers and such.
^_~ I myself need help a lot of the time.
Good job, though! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
KendraThe moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
(#) rclukins 2008-04-14
This story sounds like its going to get interesting. NEW CHAPTER! NOW!The moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
(#) I-love-frank-and-max 2008-04-17
EMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
ahhhhhh i love this story already lol
PATD CONCERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!The moon is falling. Our prayers were wasted.no need to forget.
(#) emovampire 2008-04-18
HELL YEAH!MOSHIN!!!!
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