(#) morriganscrow 2008-04-26The magical oath and the badges were a fine idea and logical!
The scene with the Imperius was excellent, as was the part with Draco and Pansy.
Ginny and the Coven are a worry. Why would an organization of mostly Ravenclaws support such as Voldemort?
With all these disparate groups running around plotting, are they going to begin tripping each other up?
Author's responseThis is spread over a couple different chapters: The Ravenclaw Coven is all Ravenclaw. Ginny was resorted there when she retook her first year. Each year, one or two 1st year girls are admitted in the spring. Of the current group, 3 are pro-pureblood and they are using Ginny to spy on Harry and Hermione. Ginny figures if Hermione is going to die, Harry will nee consolation
(#) GrantLarceny 2008-05-07its starting to suck that you're following the canon plot exactly...its almost like you're sometimes just scanning the books and pasting them into your chapters...do you have a plot of your own or not? if not i don't see the point of continuing this as we all know what happens...did you think we wouldn't recognize this plot or none of us had read the books?
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