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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Teresa 2008-04-20

  Oops.....now the jig is up! But then, I rather doubt that Harry needs to worry that much. After all, if Voldy tries to tell people that Harry and Barone are the same person who'd belive him? Of course Harry and his allies better get their plans in place before Voldy does think of something. I loved seeing how Harry dealt with the minions, the bunch who thought they could mess with Luna, and his would be fsn girl! Thanks for the chapter!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-04-20

  While this was a solid update, there were a TON of errors. Far too many for me to post here. I'd advise another twice-over at least.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Wolfric 2008-04-20

  Thanks for the chapter. W.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-20

  Hmm, lots happening here as you cover a lot of time. 'Twill be interesting to see Flamel's reaction to Potter/Barone as well as how the wizarding world reacts to Tommy-boy's tantrum. I rather suspect Harry is going to put some extra protection in place for Hermione and Luna as well as any others he considers especially close friends, if there are any in that category. I suspect Tom is going to find that he's over-reached himself but that'll take a while to become apparent.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) biged78 2008-04-21

  Good chapter. But blowing Moody to bits? Oh well, guess someone had to die.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) jjracer24 2008-04-24

  "just a chapter" Just a chapter!!! Siriusly, I thought that chapter was more than just a chapter, action packed even. Well, I think there were a few errors that could have been fixed but the main story was great, looking forward to the seeing these means you were referring to about.

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