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Angel Of The Void: Condemnation.
My poem. Opinions?

I hear a sweet angel calling me.
It is a subterfuge of the heart.
So much is said with one meaning.
And so hard, we all try to describe the indescribable-
A feeling.
But if I can breathe again,
it is because you cleared the Air
Of all debris of the former me.
(WELCOME TO THE VOID!)
Please stand still as we prepare for
this trip into the past.

She sits alone in the dark,
A silver chain encircles her neck.
You broke my heart so many times, I lost track of the fractures.
Scared to give myself to you but I always do.
Among the children of the sun
These games we play are all the same.
I tell you lies and sometimes the truth
But I can never seem to express these words.
She sits, the child of pure night.
You are tired of it all, and so am I.
But if you die, I die.
I watched you go but never again.
It will be you and I forever more.
Though she sits in chains
Though my Love is a crime,
I will steal your pain and watch you smile
She holds her head up high
I am not able to name these emotions,
But I will never let you feel all alone.
She sits, aching, pulling at her ancient chains.
Never.
She stands before a silent judge.
I will never let you feel all alone.


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Truthful opinions would be appreciated, I love writing poetry, but I know it's not my forte... There are two different people speaking in this poem.