After finding his magic earlier, a decidedly non- Gryffindor Harry Potter plots his way to success.
this is off to a great start! im looking forward to seeing what develops:)
Hey I've seen this ideal used before, but not to this depth, not this meshed out! I surely hope you continue with this! Absolutely well done and so far well written
interesting start. a more clever and calculating harry. i'm looking forward to more!
interesting beginning; looking forward to more. It looks like this Harry is more Ravenclaw or Slytherin than Gryff; which will be an interesting change.
Really nice! Something I've been thinking of writing myself, that he doesn't actually manage to grasp the idea that he has powers before Hagrid has always baffled me, I mean how daft can you be? Moving in space instantly? There has to be power there.
Looking forward to more.
Love a smart, clever Harry. Looking forward to see where you take this. Always wondered if Harry in Rowling's story had been obliviated that he didn't realize magic happened to him before Hagrid. That and the obvious banning of the word in that house.
Hmm, it's interesting to see a rather more observant and aware Harry start to put the pieces together early. I like the fact that he's already doing apparition as well as the direct wandless, and wordless, equivalent of /Alhombra/. If he works on developing this ability, he's going to be quite a shock to Hogwarts when he arrives. Depending on how you portray Dumbles, this could be seen as a good thing or a bad thing.
Interesting setup. I like this Harry - he's intelligent and analytical without being unbelievable.
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