Fahn remembers an old friend, and Jayle makes a promise. (Newfic. Pre-game, one-shot.)
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I don't know what to say here that could possibly be helpful. I liked the fact that you revised it. I liked it over at insert_phrase, but I liked it better here.
I found the story very touching, and I don't think anything more needs to be done.
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