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• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-04-12

  Very strange start, I have to say, but it has a whole lot of potential.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) spedclass 2008-04-12

  Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) haroon_angel 2008-04-12

  Absolutely Brilliant start and I really Enjoyed the Lemon Scene .... Harry's Character seems very Interesting in this Fanfiction and He seemed Weary and Guarded .... Let me guess he's Mentor will be minerva Mcgonagall because she was James Favourite Teacher and She was also Present in Hogwarts where she Teached Harry Sex Right?

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) codyesh2 2008-04-12

  Girls To Include:
  1)Tonks
  2)Bellatrix
  3)Katie Bell or Angelina Johnson
  4)Luna
  5)Cho
  6)Molly Weasley!(Its different and not written often)
  7)Daphne GreenGrass
  8)Hannah Abbot Or Susan Bones
  9)Fleur/Gabriel
  10)Rita
  11)Rosmerta
  12)Younger Mcgonagal or female teacher
  
  
  

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. Here is a breakdown of the women you suggested.
  
  
  Tonks: Possibly, havn't decided yet.
  
  Bellatrix: No
  
  Katie Bell or Angelina Johnson: Katie, probably not. Angelina, yes.
  
  Luna/Cho: As stated in the note before chapter one, not going to happen.
  
  Molly Weasley: Interesting but no, Harry is going to be at odds with her for a while because of certain things that will become clear around chapter four or five.
  
  Daphne Greengrass: Probably not, but possible
  
  Hannah or Susan: Both are certainties.
  
  Fleur or Gabrielle: Fleur, no, Gabrielle yes, but she won't make an appearance until after Harry returns to Hogwarts.
  
  Rita: Good idea, hadn't thought of that.
  
  Rosmerta: Another good idea.
  
  McGonagal or other female teacher: Yes to both.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) BJH 2008-04-12

  Hmm, like so many people I am wondering who James recruited to educate Harry. Given that she had to be a close friend of the pair and that it was 16 or so years ago, plus it would have to be someone grounded in the Pure Blood traditions who would consider the situation an honor and not a molestation. I'm guessing that the McG in the summary isn't because she thinks of Harry as her son, is it? I wonder if she took a de-aging potion to reduce the ick factor for Harry, or maybe polyjuice, either into her own younger self or some random cougar.
  
  BJH

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) Gweasley 2008-04-12

  you so have to continue this story so far its great but I want to see sooo much more. :)

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) Anaknisatanas 2008-04-12

  I loved this!! It's hot and Harry is awesome. I enjoyed his intelligence and I want to see if he does anything with the Lucius-marble, like return it to Narcissa.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) LabRat 2008-04-14

  Now this is what I call a classic. Great smut, hell, great story in general. You know it's a good story, if it would still be good without the smut. Wouldn't mind seeing Harry with all of the female Blacks in canon (Bellatrix, Narcissa, Tonks, Andromeda), but since you said no to Bella, Narcissa is done, and you've already mentioned Tonks as a possibility, I guess the only suggestion for them is Andy. I liked the way he tricked Cissy, and can't wait to see the reactions of other girls to Harry's prowess. Recommend Pansy for another Narcissa style payback.
  
  Interested in Gabby being one, but isn't she like ten or something. I know they said she was eleven in Deathly Hallows, so a year prior would make her ten. Hope you have something planned for that.
  
  Also, I'm scurious as to who Harry's teacher was.
  
  For other girls, there's always
  1.Su Li- who gets way too little play
  2.Eloise Midgen- acne girl, but acne clears
  3.Hestia Jones- older women
  4.Parvati and Padma- TWINS!!!
  5.Alicia Spinnet- don't see her much
  6.Penelope Clearwater
  7.Lisa Turpin
  8.Tracey Davis
  9.Millie Bulstrode- big girls need love too
  10.Sally-Anne Perks
  11.Madam Maxime- see number nine (just kidding, unless you think you can pull it off)
  12.Random females, or OC (wouldn't recommend, but it's your story)

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-04-15

  Very good start, can't wait to see where this goes.
  
  gunny

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-04-17

  Nice start to the story. Keep writing.
  There's a lot of backstory begging to be filled in: how Harry managed to defeat (killing with a rock is fairly easy once you've diswanded him) Lucius, when he slept with Lavender, how is his father's friend who taught him sex, who else beside Lavender he may have enjoyed.
  Since killing Lucius was "ridiculously easy," I am imagine Lucius apparated into the backyard while Harry was working in the garden. While Lucius was marching toward the house, Harry grabbed a nearby rock (perhaps that was even his chore, gathering all the rocks out of the garden, so he had a pile handy) and rushed up to the unsuspecting Malfoy and clobbered him.

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