AU. After the events of October 1981 Harry is taken and raised by Remus Lupin and Sirius Black. Everything goes fine until Harry's sixth birthday. Harry's dark creature side has come out. He's a bo...
Well its a good start. Thanks for writing. W.
Quite the attention- and interest-grabbing start, there. It'll be interesting to see how this story evolves given that Lily apparently has more than muggle-born abilities and some may well be passed on to Harry.
Well, it's definetely not bad but there are a few elements that could have been done better.
For example, Voldemort suddenly realises Lily is a vampire but is unclear just how.
And Dumbledore is really not that old. I doubt Wizards live longer than usual people unless they do so with the aid of spells or such.
(#) Cwejr 2008-06-22
Very good start. Having the two guys take Harry, messing up Dumbledork's plans is great. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
(#) LDA 2008-07-14
great start like your other fics I can't wait for this and them to be updated!
So far its pretty good I can't wait to see where you take it from here; especially with the dynamic duo raising little harry.
one note though... Remus wouldn't have been able to wear a silver chain being a werewolf and all..
Someone tried to tell you Dumbledore wasn't that old...but in cannon he's like 150years old or so so ignore them
Oh my god, this story is amazing, can't wait for more, you have created my favourite line i have ever read in a fic.
Also, dumbledore IS older than a normal wizard, you're right.
I love the start. I would like to see it continued
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