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the aftermarth of the storm? there is a second one? harry hunting and control issues
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Harry Potter and the Feel of Power
(#) jabarber69 2008-05-22
Hey interesting story, I hope you continue it!Harry Potter and the Feel of Power
(#) lycus 2008-05-22
Alright, i've never read a story where harry doesn't accept magic right away. but I am loving this story and now you have no choise but to continue it, it's too intresting to stop writing it, I just hope that it becomes a harry/hermione story but that is for later. but I have to know what happens next and will harry be able to shrink his new toys so that he can take them with him. oh and as far as mistakes I only caught one and that was when you wrote earning instead of yearning. but please update soon.Harry Potter and the Feel of Power
(#) Oldwolf 2008-05-22
Excellent story so far. I think this story has a lot of potential.
However, I would like to respectfully suggest you get a beta reader. The grammatical mistakes detract heavily from the enjoyment of the story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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