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::Akatsuki love story:: Chapter 1: What was that?

by Gaaras_sweet_cookie 1 review

An Akatsuki love story i made in my spare time, i'm still makeing more chapters & right know i'm thinking it should be a Deidara love story or a Tobi one....i'm not sure yet so rate and comment. Pl...

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008-05-25 - Updated: 2008-05-25 - 491 words - Complete

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::Akatsuki love story:: Chapter 1: What was that?

(#) Mairead 2010-03-01

This was more literate than what I was expecting. But just so you know, most people look down on "self-inserts"-- fanfiction where it seems like you're writing about yourself.

I think you'll be a good author one day.

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