- oooh! very good chappie! I do hope Harry and Hermione continue to get closer to what they were in his past life...Neville too. There's something there in that combo that I've always really appreciated.
Keep the spaces please! It makes the story easier to read and adds to the pacing.
- Definitely an interesting story and I'll second Clell65619's comments. I, for one, do appreciate the spaces between paragraphs as it improves, IMHO, the readability of the posted story.
It should be interesting to see if Hermione warms up to Harry after her initial annoyance as, even in a different house, she could/should be a great friend. And without Harry there to restrain Ron, I fear for how well she'll do as a Gryf.
(#) haroon_angel 2008-05-26Yes First Two Chapters were Brilliant and they were Quite so I enjoyed reading them even more .... your plot is very Interesting and I think Spaces between Paragraph are very nice for this story since you are posting Multiple Chapters in one Chapter .....
So keep up this Great Work.
(#) AberforthsAvatar 2008-05-26I hadn't seen this story before; it's quite intriguing. I look forward to seeing where you'll take it, and will bee looking for new chapters. Having taken him back to the beginning, you have achieved the freedom to ignore the canon timeline. I'm sure I'll enjoy your creativity.
- I don't think it's fair of Harry to leave Sirius in prison. Why not use his mage sight as an excuse and capture Wormtail. Also what happened to Vernon, is he being charged with attempted murder or is Dumbledore covering it up? Surely child abuse that was witness by three teachers couldn't be no matter what AD says. I noticed no one has talked to him about it or asked his opinion. Hope Hermione gets her head out of her ass soon, but I never cared for her bossy attitude. I'm really glad you're making this a H/Luna story as I think she will fit in brilliantly with recluse/loner Harry.
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