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Enemy of the State
4 reviewsThe case of the State of California versus William Bruce Bailey is now in session.
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First Date
(#) RockettQueeen 2008-05-28
Wow this is completely tense. I was literally on the edge of my seat but of course you can't give the verdict away in the first part of the trial now can you? LOL fabulous writing, I loved the little bits of cute, (slash calling izzy sweetheart! awwwww!) mixed in with all the stressful tension. Can't wait for the next bit! :)Author's response
Thank you! It's so difficult writing these courtroom scenes that I can't wait to get it over with. Hopefully it'll be all over in the next chapter...First Date
(#) jovifan 2008-05-29
WOW!! You have captured the courtroom tension perfectly!! So looking forward to the next chapter...Wonderful writing!!Author's response
Thank you very much! I'll try and get another chapter out as soon as possible. But no promises...First Date
(#) Slash_Addict 2008-05-29
Oh no! Not the photos!!! THE DRAMA!!!!!! ... Sorry! ^_^ I can't wait!!! Seriously, the suspence is KILLING ME!!! (falls over dead) 20 chapters man... XDAuthor's response
Yeah, 20 chapters and nearly 1700 hits. It's an epic and looks like it's not going to slow down. I'll try and get another chapter up this weekend. :DFirst Date
(#) Slash_Addict 2008-05-30
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T You could try to put up a chapter this weekend, but plz, you can take you're time. I'm not gonna be able to read anything until next weekend anyway!! I hate moving!! D:
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