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• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) pyrotechnicist 2008-06-03

  brunette
  
  definately
  
  besides all the weasleys are already redheads
  
  good chap btw
  a little short but meh
  cant complain
  no one listens =P
  
  

  Author's response

  I do listen, I just have to even the chapters out as best I can while ending each one at a convenient place.

• The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light

  (#) WereWyrd 2008-06-11

  I can understand evening out the chapters, some of them can get pretty long, but i'm not complaining about that. Ending chapters can be a right little problem sometimes, decent stopping spot for some of it. Strong women indeed, draco/ginny is pushing it just a mite, but you definitely make it believable, the interdimensional Malfoy thing is a little out there, but overall it is an excellent story.

  Author's response

  Thank you for reviewing.
  
  Regards
  
  GuardianOfLight

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