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The Trouble with Magic Is
11 reviewsHarry has potions and Transfiguration, writes a letter to Dumbledore and makes a stop in Diagon Alley
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A New Chance Continued
(#) jsdailey 2008-06-01
Great chapter! Though I wonder when exactly Hermione will warm up to Harry? Maybe after Neville tells her how much Harry is trying to help him?A New Chance Continued
(#) teachergirl 2008-06-01
I'm enjoying your story. I'm glad to see that you are including Neville. I don't care who else Harry is friends with as long as one of them Neville!A New Chance Continued
(#) Cateagle 2008-06-01
Nice!! I love the way he's helping Neville and I suspect he's going to have a similar effect on others that he cares about. It should be interesting to see how long it takes others to start feeling more open with him.A New Chance Continued
(#) ladysavay 2008-06-02
I just love these types of stories. Great that you can give Harry a chance to be all he should have been.Since the Dursely's have been exposed, I can't wait to see what happens with his custody. maybe getting Sirius out way early? i hope!
SavayA New Chance Continued
(#) Elfwyn 2008-06-04
Well done. Maybe with it unblocked he will get a new wand too. Glad too see Harry talking to a more diverse crowd this time around. In some ways it would be better if he didn't become friends with Hermione and Ron as their abrasive personalities kept others far away from Harry. The people you have him talking too would be a better backup, they are just as smart but not prejudice (like Ron) and more connected. Hope you keep it and deepen the budding friendships.A New Chance Continued
(#) FrequencyQueen 2008-06-09
Harry's being pretty sly, but I get the feeling that sooner or later someone will figure out something is odd about him and start watching him. Snape sure is a git in this story, so I hope Harry does something to him pretty soon - something he can't prove who did it to him.A New Chance Continued
(#) tarazboyz 2008-11-22
fantastic start to what could be a really great story, i am hoping that you have not given up on it but are just taking a vacation. You have an awesome start
!!!! And yes, leave the spaces between chapters, its easier to keep your place with them in there spaced apart... Tara
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