- Well done. Maybe with it unblocked he will get a new wand too. Glad too see Harry talking to a more diverse crowd this time around. In some ways it would be better if he didn't become friends with Hermione and Ron as their abrasive personalities kept others far away from Harry. The people you have him talking too would be a better backup, they are just as smart but not prejudice (like Ron) and more connected. Hope you keep it and deepen the budding friendships.
(#) FrequencyQueen 2008-06-09Harry's being pretty sly, but I get the feeling that sooner or later someone will figure out something is odd about him and start watching him. Snape sure is a git in this story, so I hope Harry does something to him pretty soon - something he can't prove who did it to him.
- fantastic start to what could be a really great story, i am hoping that you have not given up on it but are just taking a vacation. You have an awesome start
!!!! And yes, leave the spaces between chapters, its easier to keep your place with them in there spaced apart... Tara
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