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Lust in the Dungeons
1 reviewFirst lesson- mistake or will it leave her with a feeling of longing?
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Cruel Intentions
(#) armourdude 2006-03-29
This was hot. Still short on discription but I did noty expect any changes for the last review I left 5 minutes ago.
I like this line in particualr.
((Hermione looking the mirror and said "Alright so I look like a slut who just got into a catfight" rolling her eyes, "Thanks Doctor Phil."))
hey i was wondering. Dint they have a spell for looking exactly like someone else? maybe i will see that in a upcomming chapter.
I am thinking of using some of your concptes in mystory when the time comes. I will keep reading for more example.
Now honestly, this is not a great work of litiature. But for Sexy fan fic it was ok.
I rated it too.
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