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Aravis thought that she had a right to be proud of how well she'd grown accustomed to life in Archenland over the years.
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(#) Ithilwen 2008-08-23
Heh. Nice twist and nice premise, but your tenses seem to jump back and forth a bit.Benediction
(#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-16
An interesting and original idea. The final ending is perhaps a little cliche, but I don't feel like downrating this for that.
Very short, but I think the right length for this story. And it has that all-important feel that the writer knows more about the character than he is telling us, which gives depth to a story.Benediction
(#) mina09 2025-12-27
Hi!
I finished your story and honestly, I was very impressed. The expressions, pacing, and drama are so strong that it feels perfect for a comic format. If adapted into a comic or Webtoon, it could attract even more people.
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Loved your work!
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