Review for Not So Irrational

Not So Irrational

(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-08

sniffle sniffle
Ok...I will return...it's just so sad...
wipes away tears so I can review Ok crickets! Lets do the thing we do best!
crickets YEAH!
crickets and I work together to type a review
We really thought it was sad, we are ussually used to the death of Archie sniffle we just need to get used to it being Atlanta dying, it was beautifully written, and we also know that if Atlanta does not return to life, Archie and her will be reunited in the Elysian Fields, where all heroes go.
We also have one little problem, if authors keep killing off characters, HOW THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO DEFEAT/CAPTURE CRONUS?!?! That is always something that gets me! Think people, if someone dies, you have condemmened everyone else to DEATH!!
See you all in the Elysian Fields!

I am sorry if the crickets and I seem a little...what word would that be?...tense?...nervous?...enraged?
We really like your story and we hope you update soon!
the reviewer formerly known as Prince- I mean
the reviewer CURRENTLY known as Prin- NO!
the reviewer currenlty known as crazy_reviewer
(and her crickets)

Author's response

Oh you have spotted one of the parts of my plot (The part that if someone dies the others are being condemmened to death.) Well that problem will be solved dont worry.