- This is a very intriguing story and your take is one that I'll follow. I also like the pacing you've given Harry & the girls. Course a group this big makes things hard for a writer to keep everyone in even for one or two lines.
Love the addition of Luna and hope she become a dynamic as much as it seems Hermione Milli and Susan are in the group!
I suggest a powerful feminine mascot to rival the other houses should be done within the 2nd year, and I wonder of Narcissa is the only Adult woman who want in the harem house!
- Does Harry have the money to ensure that his wives have the equipment they need to play? If so, why don't they all get the best brooms they can for their positions?
Wonderful story, just wish that Harry was taking some initiative...he seems a bit too much of a cypher at present.
(#) wolfgang108 2013-05-29Love this story, but it has been five years since an update. Any chance of coming back to it? If so, is Narcissa really interested in joining the harem or the other ladies in her social circle. Maybe their interest is in having their daughters join. Thanks for sharing.
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