How to deal with being surrounded by fools, if you don't want to fit in.
- This is a very intriguing story and your take is one that I'll follow. I also like the pacing you've given Harry & the girls. Course a group this big makes things hard for a writer to keep everyone in even for one or two lines.
Love the addition of Luna and hope she become a dynamic as much as it seems Hermione Milli and Susan are in the group!
I suggest a powerful feminine mascot to rival the other houses should be done within the 2nd year, and I wonder of Narcissa is the only Adult woman who want in the harem house!
- Does Harry have the money to ensure that his wives have the equipment they need to play? If so, why don't they all get the best brooms they can for their positions?
Wonderful story, just wish that Harry was taking some initiative...he seems a bit too much of a cypher at present.
- Brilliant story!
Really enjoyed it. Really unique story and hilarious written. Too bad it was not updated in such a long time. I really hope you will update this story, but even if not I thank you for all the fun I had reading it.
Best regards, Andrei.