Frank, Gerard and the others face the Ruins. Some lives are taken, as a result. Rate and review please.
(#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-07-31 02:48:49 AMWhat side is Mikey on exactly??? I love this story, the thrill, the suspense! :D Please update soon!
Author's responseAt the moment? Haha.
He's always been on Gerard's side... you'll find out more in the next chapters ;)
Thanks! Glad you like it!
(#) stupid-little-lamb 2008-08-02 05:53:34 AMNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM!!! D'=
who's side is Mikey on??
ahh, so confused! =S
have fun, okays? =P
more when you can, lol.
Author's response=/ Don't hate me?
You'll find out more in the next chapter... which will be up soon!
Thankies xD And thankies for the review!!
(#) asherschick 2008-08-04 12:35:03 PMI actually saw this about the moment you updated it and had to print this chapter out and read it on my way to school since I was about to leave home. And then, because of some really unforeseeable and unfortunate chain of events I couldn't review. Then I came back yesterday and rated. And at last, I'm reviewing.
First of all, I want to say that I rated this +1 ambiance because especially the beginning of the chapter begged for that particular rating. I just... love it when you write like that! It's very intense and keeps tugging at your insides. What an amazing work you've done with only a few short paragraphs =)
And hell yeaa! Stratton got what he deserved finally :D By the way, I loved the way you described the change in Mauritius's expression. The disappereance of his half-evident psycopathic calmness was fantastic! It's good to know he's losing his nerve.
I'm just wondering, if possibly, the teeny-tiny voice inside Frank's head was Mikey or if it was just Frank's subconsicous. After all, there's no reason for his powers to stay still while everyone else's keep growing. Poor little Mikey, he wanted to know the plan all along. He wanted to know what they were gonna do to Gerard so he could protect him. That's just sad... :'( I just... when I read this I was miserable but then we don't even know if he's dead or not.
Hey, and I love Sum 41! Are we telepathically connected or what?
Have lots and lots of fun on vacation, by the way =)
Author's responseYou PRINTED it out? hahaha That's priceless ;) You sort of published it, then! :p
Thanks for reviewing and rating and going through all of that ;)
Thanks! I'm pretty fond of the beginning too. I actually had that part in my head for ages but couldn't fit it in anywhere... until then.
Yesh, goodbye Stratton. As my mother says, everyone gets what they deserve in the end, and that is definitely what he deserved!
Dammit! You discovered one of the things i was going to clear up in the next chapter! hahaha you're too smart for your own good... and mine! xD But he wasn't working for Mauritius and Stratton just to be in on the plans... he didn't really have a choice. You'll see what i mean in the next chapter.
Lol i guess we are! Even with our favorite ice creams! Great minds think alike, huh? hahaha ;)
(#) StandardToaster 2008-08-14 08:59:58 PMDAMMIT ALL.
Mikey confused me for a while
But now I seeeeeee. : DDDD
THIS MAKES ME UTTERLY SAD.
But this chapter was none-the-less GREAT. : DD
Author's responseHappy and sad at the same time, huh? I understand you perfectly! haha
Thank youuu, glad you think so! a And thankies for the review, i live off of them =)
(#) asherschick 2008-08-24 02:43:27 AMSo, yeah. Umm, I'm kinda reviewing again in order to keep you motivated, haha =)
Okay. I don't wanna sound demanding or anything. Hmm, what should I say, huh? Gahhhh, Mikeeeeeeeeeeeyyyy!!!
I really need to know what happens next. And I'm sure all your other pretty pretty readers do, too. So, in a way, I'm speaking on their behalf, too.
And you're totally right. Great minds do think alike, heheheeee =P
Keep it going!
P.S. Yes, I am bored. I don't have anything else to do and I'm stuck in a hotel for a week with family and no friends. At least there's the internet. But I miss my guitar :(
Author's responseThanks so much for the motivation! ;)
Just wanted to let you know and anyone else that reads this that I?M NOT DEAD! haha I've just been really busy, but I'm still working on the next chapter. I'm on page 16 of it so far so, yeah, it's going to be huge! So hang in there for me xD
Sorry to hear you're bored, but since i took forever to respond to your comment, you're hopefully not bored anymore xD
- PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! Im dying to know what happens next!! PLEASE!! Ur killing me!!
Author's responseSo little time, so many things to do. The next chapter is extremely complicated and long (18 pages so far) and i have to make sure everything i write makes sense, since its an explanation of everything thats happened in the story so far.
I feel really bad about taking so long... I'll have it up soon, i promise.
Don't hate me? ;)