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Of Surrender

Envy makes progress with his pet alchemist.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Edward Elric, Envy - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/03/01 - Updated: 2006/03/01 - 492 words

Reviews

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) Esbee 2006-03-01 03:43:07 PM

  Interesting third chapter. So the feeling is not entirely one-sided. To offer some constructive criticism, I think Envy's response to Ed's telling her to go to hell was a tad cliched. Not entirely out of character, but cliched. You continue to have an excellent grasp on the characters though. I also think calling Envy Adam when he was at his weakest, in a mortal situation, was a nice touch.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. ^_^ I was worried about the cliche factor, but I also can't see Envy resisting the urge to make a snarky comment. Hmm. Maybe I just need to work more on the clever snark. ^_~

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) amy 2006-07-27 12:43:35 PM

  nice story!! update soon

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) aimhope 2007-09-10 10:23:55 AM

  Hey! I love your writing technique. Please update; it's rare these days to see good EnvyxEd like this- it's mostly all been written before- and it'd be a shame to see it waste away.

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) aimhope 2007-09-10 10:26:28 AM

  Hey! I love your writing technique. Please update; it's rare these days to see good EnvyxEd like this- it's mostly all been written before- and it'd be a shame to see it waste away.

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) Noizchild 2008-03-10 06:16:35 AM

  Are there going to be anymore chaps?

• Of Blood and Soul

  (#) shuldig 2008-03-21 05:08:55 PM

  Definitely something to watch for. Although its AU it seems so possible so props for that.

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