The End. Dumbles is tired from a prolonged squawk.
- I have to say, this is probably my very favorite HP fan fic out there. I have read hundreds, and they all had something wrong with them. A bad plot, the sex got too disgusting and too frequent, the editing was terrible, the canon was completely ignored in terms of the characters personalities, not enough detail, too much detail, bad pairings, really bad endings, totally ridiclious and impossible plot lines, lack of flow in the plot, and many more, much too numerous to name here. Your story had everything those stories were missing and more. I loved the whole story. The only thing I really didnt care for was the desecration of Dumdledores grave and laughing in his face at his death; I always pictured Harry being the better man in the end, with the extra compassion and forgiveness that makes him special. I would have liked to see more shit done to Ginny and her mother, like Arthur kicking them out of the family, maybe ending up as Knocturn Ally four sickle whores, however. They really deserved it. I was always in favor of Harry and Hermonie hooking up, but I liked what you did with Daphne a lot and was in the end contented with it. And good old Voldie as a weak snake in a zoo?? Beautiful! Couldn't get much better than that. I cant wait to read more from you, keep it up!!!! Tara cassidy
- For a time, I thought that you would not tell us what they did to Tom...
I'm happy, too, that neither Nevile nor Harry told Albus on his death bed! I know that this sound kind of disrespectful, but I kind of dislike the times when Harry's confrontation with Albus ends with Harry giving up and allowing Albus the final victory by doing what said headmaster asked (if Albus was really bad in the story, of course! if he was good, it doesn't count...)
- I have just finished reading this story for the 2nd time,and the fact I read it twice says how much I enjoyed it.I'm big on characters, and you did a great job again with making these people your own. I have to admit,the articles written by Luna for the Quibbler were worth the price of admission by themselves.I look forward to the rest of your stories being updated, I think Chance Meeting is great so far.
Thanks for sharing,you've written some very entertaining tales.
(#) noreenklose 2009-05-18 11:13:23 PMExcellent story. It was well written, with scads of humor packed into it. I loved the ending, I would have told Albus that when he got to Hell, he could always ask Tom Riddle to tell him! Then, I'd laugh at him, and leave. Thanks for writing such great stories, and please continue with your writing.
- This is a GREAT story! I love the interaction between Harry & Neville. I love how Dumbledore never gets his questions answered. And I like how it's not a happy ending all around, but there's still closure. Thanks for sharing.