The will reading of Sirius Black. A little romance starts.
- "why charles you do keep in shape!," .. oh you legend! narcissa's little whirlwind in the will reading session is fantastic.. i am very interested in writing a tense will reading scene of my own that doesn't pull many punches and you have given a lot to mull over.. well done again
Author's responseYeah that is one of my favoirite lines from the story. Good luck on your story. The one thing that I got called on by reviewers on other sites was that Harry should have been more angry with Narcissa because Kreacher ran to the Malfoys with his information.
(#) The_Resident 2006-04-28 09:43:19 PMJim, another excellent chapter. I did find this one little bobble: Its grieving and everyone keeps telling me I need to be doing it more. should be It's called grieving and everyone keeps telling me I need to be doing it more.
I don't need to tell you how hard it is to find any 'bobbles' in your writing as you have the proof of it in my reviews. Keep up the excellent work and I'm off to read the reading of the Potter will aka the next chapter.
(#) MasterKtulu 2006-05-10 11:48:46 AMHey JBern! I’m one of those 99% of people who don’t review regularly you mentioned. Would you like to know why my kind doesn’t usually write reviews? It’s because we have nothing more to say than “Great chapter, hope you update soon”... Do you see now? How would you like to receive 2250 or more of those per chapter? It would take way too long for you to read all of those useless reviews… We’re actually doing everyone of your fans a huge favour by allowing you more time to write and ultimately update sooner… I hope in the future that you can begin to understand our kind’s ways and be thankful for our organised Read & Leave-Without-Reviewing (R&LWR for short) policy. Anyway, great chapter, and hope you update soon.
Author's responseThanks for the laugh! I see I have lured you out of your comfort zone of R&LWR. I know this is foriegn territory for you. I appreciate the gesture on everyone out theres part to allow me to write faster and update sooner without replying to reviews. :)
Sadly, the only measuring sticks fanfiction offers is # of hits, # of reviews.
So from your handle you must be a Lovecraft fan. Wouldn't a HP/HP Lovecraft crossover be intersting. Though the heros in those always seem to end up dead or insane at the end.
- Poor Harry, I know ginny is upset, but the Ginny that we know, wpu;dm't say the things like that... she would know that Harry would have done everything that he could do to save him if he could.
Emm, what happened to the Potter's family master ring, I would have thought that Harry would get one, as he is the last of the Potters, so what is Dumbledore up to then?? Dumbledore is still trying to tell Harry what to do, and everyone else is doing the same, I thought they were firends of Harry... why didn't anyone ask what Harry went. Will at least Harry told them where to go.
Author's responseThe Ginny we know, well we don't really know Ginny that well until book 6. She's never lost a brother before. Most stories portray her as the uberwitch. In my version she is a strong young witch who is the 7th child and only girl. It's possible that she might be only as mature as a 15 year old girl...~Jim