Pretty much based off the song"The Jetset Life Is Gonna Kill You"Gerard is a killer and he does everything because the woman he loves tells him too.He lost his memory and now its slowly coming back...
(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2009-03-01 03:52:42 PMWell, i really like the concept of the story. The only thing is that i can't really take your story seriously because of your grammar; you need to leave two spaces at the start of every sentence and not use words like "wtf". Sorry if that sounds condascending, but its true.
I hope you take that on board.
Cant wait for your next chapter :)
Author's responseThanks for the review and thanks for telling me that! I'm just not that good at the whole writing thing....Well I'll try my best to make things better!