(#) jabarber69 2009-06-24hey its fun to loose all of your reviews aint it! that is what happens when you change something to your story after you posted it....still hope you dont get discourage and continue this story!
Author's responseI expected it after i deleted all of the old one.
i'm much happier with it as a whole now the OC factor has been removed.
Chapter 3 is coming soon, nearly got it the way i want it.
- good story. just one nit pick, are you doing away with the entire hp canon monetary system. in canon a wand cost 7 galleons not 7 sickles, and a galleon is worth roughly five pounds. other than that I really like the story.
Author's responsei hav always disliked the canon money system, so it is scrapped completely, the coins are gold and gold is expensive so
1 Galleon = £100
10 Sickles to 1 Galleon
1 Sickle = £10
50 Knuts to a sickle
1 Knut = 20p
- Very good start! You have good style. It can be polished a little, but I believe this comes with time. Just keep writing :)
The only problems I have are how easy it was to make Harry ward of the school and second, how can anyone leave 11 year old boy alone for one month in a hotel. That itself is criminal...
Author's responseStranger things have happened and from what i've read the wizarding world isnt renowned for its childcare.
I think especially in a case of taking a magical child away from a muggle family it would be that easy due to the massive amount of bias towards magic
i appreciate the comments though and it hs given me stuff to think about which i like
- I like your version of a few characters.
I always thought McGonagall was too meek when it came to how Harry was treated. She's a stern task master in class and I expected her to be the same out of it.
He sees Ron for what he is, that should change the Gryffindor three.
I like how Mrs. Longbottom is being portrayed not to mention the budding frendship with Neville.
There's not much I found fault with given you've done one re-write already.
Having said that WHERE's Hermione????
Author's responseMcKitty is how i think she should have been, strong with a strict set of morals
There will be no Gryffindor 3
I like my Neville too
We will meet Hermione on the train
Thank you for taking the time to review i appreciate it
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