A look inside Patrick's head and a new person added to the story. Patrick's become a little deeper.
(#) areyounormal 2009-08-26 03:30:28 PMOkay - I'll do the review thing first.
I'm enjoying this and I'd really like to see where it goes. I imagine that Pete is thinking 'Damn! He's got a girlfriend!" Lol! And the confusion starts!! :D
Second thing. It's a personal preference, so by all means ignore me, but I really hate it when people state how many reviews they want before they carry on. You should be writing for your own pleasure and enjoy it if others like it too.
Granted, I'd love it if people read AND reviewed, but they don't, not all. But I really appreciate the ones that do, because they do it because they take precious time out of their day to say they like something and that's special. I'll ask people to review (if they have time), but I won't specify numbers - mostly because I'm too keen to keep writing.
Do it because you love it, people will review anyway.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's responseThanks for telling me that. I'm glad you liked it. And I only tell people that I need a certain amount of reviews because I need to know that people are reading the story and actually LIKING it. I'd hate to just babble on and on and on to no one. Also, I kinda need time to think of what I'm gonna write each time first. Each chapter is different because they are in different POVs, so I need to create a character that seems real and not your run-of-the-mill preppy, emo, goth, or gay person. They need to seem like an actual person. You get what I'm trying to say? If not, sorry I bothered you.
(#) areyounormal 2009-08-26 09:33:32 PMNo, I do get it - but what I'm saying is, you should trust in your abilities a little more - you're a good writer and your characterisation is working just fine :)
Looking forward to more
(#) Emmsiebabe 2009-08-27 11:12:09 AMPlease update soon. i agree, again, with areyounormal it should be about whether or not you enjoy writing but i get where you're coming from with the whole " i need t know people like my stories" thing cuz i totally agree. i love your stories btw! =] update soon plese! just need what 5 more?
(#) Emmsiebabe 2009-08-27 11:13:34 AMand i want to knw why Pete was staring at Patrick. was he thinking "who the fuck is he talking to?" or "Damn it! He has a girlfriend!" or "why is he being nice to me???!!!" =] lol!
(#) petewentzlover69 2009-08-28 10:31:59 PMThis is becoming a really good story so far. I love it and I'm more curious about what Pete was thinking about and why he was looking at Patrick that way. I NEED to read his point of view. HURRY IT UP WOMAN!! lol jk jk I'm not rushing you... well not too much! =p
- Really loved the update. and I agree a bit with areyounormal and can't it just be 6 reviews? :)
(#) Emmsiebabe 2009-09-01 08:47:55 AMits been six days. if u leave it to long ur fans will get bored!
(#) charliexbrown 2009-09-01 01:02:52 PMSandra, hey? Hmm! Who could she be?... Interesting. Hopefully it won't jeopardise any... future plans. Haha.
Here we are, your 8th review. I didn't see the update before, I completely missed it. But yeah, in future you might want to consider a lower review limit. I got sick of asking in the end, so I just carried on my story regardless and found it got more as it went on.
People seem to be loving this story anyway, you shouldn't need to ask! :D
(#) chemically_romanced 2009-09-26 01:20:13 AMI like this!! I think I'dd seen it before but there was only a first chapter but yeah ^.^' I like it! can't wait for more!! C_R
(#) Emmsiebabe 2010-02-06 11:41:55 AMcome on. update soon?? please