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• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-08-30

  yay first to review.
  
  Loved the last line.
  
  "It's a lot like chicken."
  
  AHAHAHA!
  
  oh no... what is going to become of Pete?
  
  Update soon pretty please. NO wonder this story is saved in my favorites, it's brilliant!

  Author's response

  Wow!! Thanks for the compliment, I am VERY flattered!! :D
  
  I couldn't help myself with that line! And I figured it might be the sort of thing he might say :)
  
  Pete is in trouble isn't he. Desperate to please his 'master', but he's so confused right now.
  
  More soon, I promise!
  Sas x

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  (#) sarahhh 2009-08-30

  this story is great. I just read all the chapters in the last hour and all I can say is that I love the originality of it. I mean 'A Little Sixteen Candles' video is a little overused, but you're like going beyond it, and instead you're writing about what's happening after the video instead of during it or something rather.
  
  Thumbs up for the awesome story, update soon :)

  Author's response

  Thanks!! I glad you think it's a bit different and that you like it! :D
  
  The video is just fascinating. The way it's been put together has been really well thought out. Like, at the start when Patrick says that the blend is starting to fail - he says it just as Pete picks up the bottle of Holy Water and it's not until the end that you find out why and that it relates back to that very thing.
  
  Also - the whole thing is clearly a set up for Beckett to get Pete back. And you see Beckett beating up only one person and on closer inspection, that's one of the vampires that Pete escaped from when he wouldn't bite the girl.
  
  Then his refusal to drink human blood struck me - what did he eat at Beckett's. I kind of made up the period he'd been there, obviously, but for him to be so strong compared to others, he really only could have had one thing - Beckett's own blood. For that to be the case, Beckett must have had special plans for him - which has yet to be revealed.
  
  I'm really enjoying writing this story - mostly because the video has given me so much to work with!
  
  Thanks for reviewing and sorry about the long rambling reply - I'm feeling chatty! :D
  
  Sas x

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  (#) charliexbrown 2009-08-31

  Oh no!! What sort of task could Beckett have in mind? Has Pete really gone back to him for good? If so, does Patrick know he's evil? Will he go through with the task? And if not, are the gang gonna be able to get Pete out? Will Andrea be able to get out herself and make someone see sense? And does Patrick really think that disgusting mess tastes like chicken?!
  
  There's so many more questions I'm asking myself!! Can't wait for the next chapter :D

  Author's response

  LOL!! Well - your questions in order:
  
  1 - task - sorry can't say just yet
  2 - Pete - sorry can't say just yet
  3 - Patrick - he hasn't said so yet
  4 - task - no idea, lol!
  5 - gang - we'll see, shall we?
  6 - Andrea - let's hope
  7 - chicken - I highly doubt it!! Lol!!
  
  Blood must at least taste of something nice to vampires as they seem to really enjoy it. Not so sure about the concoction for Pete and now Patrick though, it does sound pretty disgusting. No wonder Pete swigs it straight down! :)
  
  Thanks for reviewing!! Will begin the next chapter tomorrow.
  
  Sas x

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  (#) Moonshyne 2009-08-31

  Hi there Sas,
  
  I'm glad Andrea has been able to break her mind control for now. It seems it's only becuase he's weak from Pete's feeding.
  
  I love the conflict Pete is feeling with this all. Not understanding why he left what would be perfect presents for William alone. Is he going crazy, somehow I don't think so.
  
  I'm so interested to find out what the task is and how he's going to be dealing with it.
  
  Maybe Andrea can get a layout of the place as she walks around with Ryan.
  
  Looking forward to more when you get a chance.
  
  I see you have another story up, I'm gonna take a peek at it!!

  Author's response

  Moonshyne, you are very astute! Either that or we are very much of the same mind. Probably both!!
  
  The task will be revealed shortly. I finished plotting it out to the end now and I'm finally happy with how it's going to go. I just hope I write it well enough.
  
  Thanks again for reviewing and, I umm, have another one up now too. I said I wouldn't do this, but I can't help myself!
  
  Sas x

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  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-21

  LoL you know what else is a lot like chicken? Octopus. Fried. Or something like that.. it was at this chinese buffet place I went to today :)

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