A new school, unwarranted beatings, and two unlikely friends.
(#) TheSoundNA 2010-12-27 11:26:42 PMspasms Am I right to assume that there is more on the way? Cause this is just: heavenly choir starts to sing
It was amazing, well written, gripping, with few gramatical errors (though I think I just made one... Hmm), and FRERARD!!! :D
I cannot believe that this is your first fic. Write more, you're gonna have us all wrapped around your finger soon. (ps, I would rate it, too, but I'm fresh out of the points and shit)
Update soon, with a preferably meaty chapter for us all to sink our teeth into. I'll definetly be watching this one.
You've got a gem here, darlin'.
Author's responseOh my god! Thank you so much! I must admit I was having a really bad morning (four hours of sleep and my contacts are the wrong prescription) but guys, you honestly brought tears to my eyes. I'm writing the next chapter now, it should be done hopefully tonight or tomorrow. Thanks (again)!!!
(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-28 01:38:46 AMBites lip
I'll admit, you've sparked my interest. I adore stories like this, that has different layers. I don't feel too over-whelmed after reading, but I feel I've read enough to want more.
So, that's what I'm asking of you, to write more.
I could picture the scene as if I was one of those children walking by, which is pure brilliance.
You got talent, kid.
Keep it up and throw us a new chapter some time soon, please?
I'll rate too.
Author's responseThank you so much! Sorry the first chapter's a little slow, things should pick up from here on out but there were a few things I had to set up. Next chapter should be out real soon, fingers crossed :) Seriously, you're wonderful, reading this made me smile so much!
(#) bythegraceofgod 2010-12-28 12:25:55 PMYes, write more indeed!
I'm begging you!
This is absolutely amazing.
Author's responseAw, shucks! There's definitely a lot more coming, I'm gonna be out of town tomorrow, but I'll try to get a decent-sized chapter out sometime late tonight. I'm writing it as I go xD Thanks lovely, it means a lot!
- swoon Well...
That was totally and compleately awesome.
You're deffo onto something amazing here.
Hoping for an update soon ;)
Author's responseOne steaming-hot update coming right up! I'm gonna do it if it takes me all night :) Thanks a million!
(#) DangerDays_ 2010-12-29 06:51:38 AMWow.
I've read some Frerards in my time, but none of them have had a first chapter that has me as hooked as this. Keep it up, I mean, if this is your first fix, then you have serious talent my friend.
Keep going because I have a feeling this could be good :D
update soon :D
Author's responseThanks! I've got plans to become a writer, but I figured I'd do a little fanfiction to combat some writer's block. I love ficwad, though, I'm gonna be here for a long time :) Next chapter should be out soon, things'll get steamy. I'm so glad you like it, keep reading!