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Hurtfull
(#) Maldoror 2006-05-16
It's 'Hurtful' (only one L at the end), and the summary is a run-on sentence, which makes it hard to read. Here's a site that has, among other things, a handy guide to punctuation: http://littlecalamity.tripod.com/HowTo2.html. As for content, Iruka is a ninja, which means I very much doubt he'd let Kakashi smack him around without - at the very least - dodging. He'd probably lose in the end, but he'd at least make a fight of it. He's not a defeatist personality by any means. Maybe that is something you can address in the next chapter.
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