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Harry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) Zucht 2011-05-16
I like the direction you have taken this chapter. I woulodn't mind if Susan became a regular with Harry. I also wouldn't mind it if Hermione got a little action with Harry, but, you don't seem to be going that way so I'll have to leave it to my fevered imagination. It would be interesting to see Pansy's reaction - say she was spying on Harry for Draco and watched him bringing a girl, say Susan, to 20 orgasms with several pints of his semen.
Really, this is a very good story, it's light and fun... it's nice to smile while reading.Author's response
Oh Harry and Hermione are going to get together, don't you worry about that!Harry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) siledubhghlase 2011-05-16
This story is actually cute and funny in a way and I mean that as a compliment. It's actually fun to read, but I guess the thing that had me chuckling is a misspelling of yours in this chapter during the encounter between Harry and Susan. You write that Harry shot "seamen" all over Susan. All I could think of was thousands of tiny sailors running all over her body and skiing down her breasts. The word you want is "semen."
I'm not making fun of you, honest. It's just one of those things that gave a middle-age crazy person a smile. Good job!Author's response
Thanks for the review, I should really have someone "beta" these before posting, spell check isn't catching my stupidity! I appreciate you enjoying this story for what it is, my own deviant mind at work!Harry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) lycus 2011-05-18
I love the story, and Harry will be known as a sex god now that he gave a girl 20 orgasams, especally since the spells that he uses for sex seem to be permanent. Now all he has to do is make his semen taste good, have his man parts vibrate and become prehensile and he will be set. But you might have accidentaly written some angst since ginny seems to be in love with Hermione but Hermione admitted to being in love with Harry I can't wait to see how this plays out.Harry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) ficbob 2011-05-19
This is a fun read and I am glad that you have some mystery added to the fic.
ThanksHarry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) nympotter65 2011-05-24
interesting hope you update soon don't wait too long for Hermione to explain herself to Harry Whats with the dream with all the witches and Harry hope to find out soonHarry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) wapitibull 2011-05-31
This was an amazing story. I can't wait to see what happens next. For this story I don't have a clue as to where you are going to go with it. Please hurry with an up date.Harry Potter and the Coven Of Hogwarts
(#) juanjoseso 2011-06-06
stupid ginny choosing to bitch another girl and rather be a dyke and whore then be with a guy and steal a straight girl and rape her making her a lesbian
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