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(#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-01 02:28:06 PM
Awww. I still don't forgive Frank but it was a lovely end to a great story. -
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(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-06-01 02:29:50 PM
Thank you for the extra chapter. It finished off the fiction perfectly. Lucie was all Frank, wasn't she? She probably helped out a lot.
The ending... sigh Then ending made me cry. Not the funeral, or the dumbass LynZ, but Frank's mini gallery. I won't cry at most anything, but you made me cry. Kudos. -
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(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-06-01 03:21:00 PM
CONTINUE 'FALLING'!!! brilliant story, that ending brought a tear to my eye :') -
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(#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-06-01 04:15:26 PM
you are a awesome wright this story was so beautiful and moving at the end and the song gone with its so well no am not a big Avril Lavigne but the song gose well i cry a bit at the end you can tell frankie love Gee so much but he did what he thought was best at the time
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(#) Nicnivin 2011-06-01 04:32:05 PM
This was beautiful....I cried..again! One of my favorites and I agree, you should continue 'Falling'
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(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-06-01 04:46:30 PM
oh... no offense, but that ending kinda sucked. It was very abbrupt and how the fuck did gee die?Author's response
Aw, sorry you didn't like it. :/ Yeah I know the ending was a bit abrupt, which is part of why I put in the extra chapter to cushion the blow.
But to answer your question: During the part where Bandit looks over at Lindsey while talking to Frank, she mentions he died of end stage lung cancer. Probably from his smoking habit. -
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(#) CarronKilljoy 2011-06-01 05:12:10 PM
Thank you. Thank you so much for one of the most beautiful, inspiring and moving things I have ever read. This story was so incredible and was even better with the sad ending (I cried a lot ) I really wanted a happy ending for them but it would have been so obvious so it's better this way. Thanks again, I love your writing -
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(#) SoundlyAwakeTonight 2011-06-01 08:17:02 PM
I never cried harder T.T This was a great story, thank you for writing it, it was moving. I loved it! T.T
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(#) jadesohma 2011-06-01 08:49:00 PM
NO NO NO NO!!!!!! HE CAN'T DIE! GERARD WAY WILL LIVE FOREVER! I swear that's just preparing me for his real death. Anyway. I can't say that I loved it... BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD:D Crying, but amazing awesome! :D Your faithful servent, ~JS~