I say jam session... It's more Zaria and Jay showing off;D
(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-06-02 08:43:37 AM
aww frankies gonna fuck up big time by the looks of it...
love it :) update as soon as you can pleaseeee
It's looking that way ain't it?
And there might be more today, but if not I promise there will be tomorrow:D
HURRY up with the next upddate
i'm typing as fast as i can :)
The whole Zaria/Frank and Zaria/Ray situation is so unrealistic. She's 13, right? Really, you're making them seem like paedos.
Nah, she's 15; but yeah I get that it's weird.
In your first chapter synopsis and the actual chapter it mentions several times that she's 13. Indiscrepancies there.
It says in the chapter entitled "Witness Protection?!" it explains that Zaria is actually 15:-)
(#) Truthchild8 2011-06-03 05:43:20 AM
Peoples! It really does say that...I've even commented on it lol
You did :]