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Fragile
39 ReviewsHow fragile is life? How good is it to keep a secret from someone, even when you don't want to break their heart. Who will be the hero- even with his last breath? (A/A, J/T)
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(#) horseluvinfreak 2006-06-06 09:17:28 AM
OMG!!!!This was just way to sad!!!!But It was excellent to readeven though about Archie. Thank you for some of the J/T!!!!Author's response
Thanks, that's was the whole point of the story- to make people feel sad. if you didn't feel sad, I'd have to say that I failed at what I was attempting. And you're welcome for the Jay/Theresa-ness in there, it was good to put in, added more drama and the sense of loss was greater. Thank you for the review! ~Demenior -
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(#) Frimmy 2006-06-06 11:36:26 AM
ENJOYED IT???
dies
dude. that was incredibly sad. listening to sad music really didn't help either...now i have to go mourn for Archie's supposed death...grr...see how sad you have made the Frimm?
mou...it was well written though. you didn't skip the gory bits of death either, nice.Author's response
...that probably wasn't the best to say, was it? DON'T DIE! Great that I know I can inspire those sorts of feelings in people, and the music probably did most of it though XD Yeah, I need to go write some sort of happy one-shot to cheer you guys (and myself) up. Sorry I made you so sad... And yeah, I wanted to make the story real, so I didn't skip out on anything that most people usually skirt around... was it too much? Thank you for the review! ~Demenior -
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(#) Moonee 2006-06-06 01:55:48 PM
My dad just had to ask me why I was crying. That was...It was amazing. I love how you made Archie realize what a hero was. And I love how atlanta felt sad because he said he had no-one. (grabs a kleenex) kudos to you, that was the best coot story I've read so far. I only hope that I'll be able to write like that someday.
Your devoted fan,
MooneeAuthor's response
I usually get near the verge of crying every time I read this myself, sorry if I got you embarassed D= And Archie needs to know what a hero he is, I just helped him realize it as he died ;) And poor Atlanta, I think she does like Archie the same way he likes her, but she just doesn't know how to show it. So finally realizing that you love someone and then them saying they have no one... it'd hurt me too. The best? I don't think so, I'm not that great with CotT fanfictions, but thank you for the compliment. Work hard and keep trying, listen to the comments, and you'll be outdoing my writing by leaps and bounds. And as a fan... wow... I think one of the one-shots will be for you soon, you've stuck through all my terrible writing thus far, and so thank you. ~Demenior -
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(#) Arisey 2006-06-06 02:05:39 PM
I'm sorry, but it just seemed too dramatic. Although I loved all your other stories, this one just seems...less..I don't know, but it doesn't seem as great as the others. It was well written, but this is a kid's show we're talking about!Author's response
I'm sorry it was 'too dramatic' for you. What I do when i write is I try to pull strings of emotion in the heart, so in 'Quiet Time' I focused more on a soft, calm feeling that left you satasfied and at peace. With this story, I wanted to leave you in tears, or sniffling a bit. That's why it had to be dramatic- but not to the point where it was too predictable. As for a kids show? The fanfictions don't have to be as calm as the show, but I will make the rating higher if you think I've under-rated it too much? Thank you for the feedback ~Demenior -
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(#) HugThePineapple 2006-06-06 03:21:01 PM
Wow...I am so, ready to cry.
You are truly an amazing writer...and Archie and Atlanta, are, in my opinion, the best pairing in CotT.
That was an AMAZING fanfiction...please keep writing.
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