How fragile is life? How good is it to keep a secret from someone, even when you don't want to break their heart. Who will be the hero- even with his last breath? (A/A, J/T)
(#) Elsask 2006-06-11 01:01:42 PM
wow that was amazing, i am not usually a person to cry but you got a few tears from me. Good job keep on writing, it was sooooooo good.
Wow. Thats amazing. You are an amzing author, im not worthy. Wow, i have never cried so hard (yea i know thats pathatic). Im still shocked that i am not getting electrocuted while typing this. Wow.
(#) jenn_theresa 2006-07-21 01:06:18 PM
wow you are a great arthor you should write more stories like that. the only time i cry so hard is when i saw my grandpa died in froint of me. that's well a good thing ok
(#) Queen Denby 2006-07-27 09:22:58 AM
how could you!!!! you killed archie!!! how the heros WAIT have atlanta get him back!!
(#) fire_godess 2006-08-05 03:05:27 PM
really good!If made me cry!
(#) fluffy pup 2006-08-14 03:02:32 PM
i cried how could you do that u killed archie sobs
that was beautiful. thats all i can say. beautiful. :|
(#) RainPaw 2006-09-10 07:26:15 PM
I thoguht i had read your story but it turns out my friend just told me about it in great detail, so i was showing my borther the story and relize i had never read it and i just read the last sentecs and started to cry, later on i read the whole thing and at the same time inokly(is that how it's spell) i had 'Slipped Away' by:Avril on in the background. anyway it was really sad mabe me cry lots and really realzise "How fragile life can be" siff,siff(tear runs down face)
tears in eyes that story made me cry it was so touching. i loved it.
bursts out crying
(#) zucchini 2006-10-02 10:11:31 PM
i never cry but......sob.....that was a real tear jerker
it was awsome