Hey here's Chapter 2! Enjoy! :D
- God, I love this story.
The ONLY problem that I have with it is that it is a little hard to read. If you space it a little more then it wont turn out to be a block of text.
I'm not trying to sound bitchy or anything. Sorry if it came out that way. I'm not really good with words...=\
But this story is just amazing. Update soon please.
Author's responseI totally understand! I was trying to fix it but since im fairly knew to this site it's kinda hard to fix :/ BUT I will fix it soon so don't worry! XD Thanks sooo much for the review and especially for reminding m of my problem! :D
- So um you're really descriptive and I love how you write already :]
I mean it might be because I just finished a fic by somebody whose first language was not English and they misspelled EVEYTHING but I don't think so...
Loving the story already, keep it up! :]